This episode only aired two nights ago here (Australia) so hurrah for context - this is so sweet, yet still manages to stay in character (my twisted perception thereof, at least) - I *adore* this pairing and you write it so well ^_^
Hope to see some more jack/mike c from you in the future (and ed/lupo - not something that ever crossed my mind before reading your stuff, but the whole domestic scene with the dog just defied description and got me hooked)
Great writing, great fic ^_^
~Ftihfrteye