ext_12221 ([identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] perpetual_motion 2009-05-22 01:59 am (UTC)

I loved this so much. So much. The quiet way Snape and Neville care for each other is incredibly moving, and I loved the dry humor between them too. It's lovely to see Neville's fear and Snape's biting insults transformed into healthy respect and gentle teasing. ♥

I really admire your understated, episodic style of storytelling; you give us just enough detail. And I loved the role of your side characters too, like Minerva and Hermione, your OC's, and even Ron and Harry at the end. I got a huge smile on my face when the trio was reunited. ♥♥♥

Really lovely work!

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