ext_34906: Icon by me. (Naruto: Naruto.)
ext_34906 ([identity profile] candyflosskillr.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] perpetual_motion 2010-05-31 07:17 am (UTC)

I think you've handled how each character is dealing with what happened so well. His mother feels like a very real person, and her reactions and emotions are kind of heartbreaking but I love that. The Guy Kilowog conversations always come across so well.

I'm looking forward to future chapters. :3
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