http://natasha-alexis.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] natasha-alexis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] perpetual_motion 2010-07-05 04:25 am (UTC)

Love In The Aftermath - addendum

Sorry, sorry, forgot to mention what a fantastic job you did with Ducky, and how totally on point he was with Gibbs.

Loved that you showed Jimmy helping in the search for Tony, and that Gibbs was aware of his contribution and made sure that Tony knew about it, as well.

Ziva's punch to Tony's arm, McGee's headslap to Tony, Ziva's to Gibbs, all of it was perfectly in character and exactly how they would have acted.

Forgot to mention how perfect the two second hesitations were when Ziva misspoke... you nailed it.

Love this story. It is definitely a keeper.

n_a

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