"I didn't know how long I would have to wait before I see him again."
I am super annoyed by that sentence. Where is this woman's editor? Come to think of it, there are tons of mistakes in this that any self-respecting editor ought to have noticed. Which makes me wonder just how awful the first draft must have been, when this is the final result.
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on 2009-02-16 09:58 am (UTC)I am super annoyed by that sentence. Where is this woman's editor? Come to think of it, there are tons of mistakes in this that any self-respecting editor ought to have noticed. Which makes me wonder just how awful the first draft must have been, when this is the final result.