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The MASH fic is now 18 pages and 8200+ words long. 2200 words alone have been written today. And I'm not even sure Hawkeye sounds right.

[livejournal.com profile] distaff_exile should get a pony for all the beta work she's doing, and you lot should get ponies for getting updates on this thing and no actual fic at all.


“You are not allowed to use any medical terminology in this conversation, Beej. This isn’t a medical problem. It is what it is.”

“For Erin or for us?”

There’s a pause, heavy with the weight of everything they’ve avoided saying for so very long. BJ stares at the wall, notices a scratch he hasn’t seen before. He wonders what Hawkeye’s staring at all the way across the country.

“Beej,” it’s Hawkeye’s soft voice, the one he always used back in Korea to talk BJ down from the high, windy places in his mind. “We’re not supposed to talk about it. It’s better if we don’t talk about it.”

“Why?”

“Because you have a wife and three kids.”

It feels like a brick has landed in BJ’s stomach. He can’t breathe for a minute. “Hawk-“

“We don’t talk about it, BJ.” And Hawkeye hangs up the phone.


And if you think that brings the angst, you ain't seen nothin'.

on 2007-07-06 03:41 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] dragonessasmith.livejournal.com
I'm super-excited for this, because I saw my first two episodes of MASH a couple weekends ago. ^^ I was clearly deprived as a child.

on 2007-07-06 03:46 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] perpet-fic.livejournal.com
Oh, god, I literally grew up with this show. I can't remember a time I wasn't watching it. My mother would watch it late at night, and I'd wander in and it'd be on. And I love it just as much. I swear my love of tall, gangly men comes from Alan Alda as Hawkeye [see: Tennant, David; Shanks, Michael [pre-buffing]. It's really just awesome.

Although, I will not be sharing this particular dimension with my mother, as it would break her brain.

on 2007-07-08 03:53 pm (UTC)
Posted by (Anonymous)
Alright, this is totally unrelated to this particular fic, but I gotta say how much I love your CSI Nick work (although I think you've stopped writing CSI, right?)
"Enduring" was just so painful (in a good way) because Nick is so broken and Gil is so helpless.

"The 3 things Warrick Brown didn't do..." (Nick/Warrick, post-GD) was something different, and just as heart-breaking. Especially the last segment. Amazing how you do it when we don't even see Nick, just the worry and stress Warrick builds up. Breath-taking.

Fics these unforgettable deserves due credit (even if my comment is overdue by 2 years). Here's hoping you'll get back to writing CSI! And if you do write more Nick stuff, a good place for fanfic appreciation is the lj comm oh_no_nicky (http://community.livejournal.com/oh_no_nicky/)

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