I think you did a wonderful job with this. I have not read the original story but I am definitely going to now. I really liked your characterisations of everyone. I liked the subtle ways you showed each characters unique traits, Percy's seriousness and almost innocence in the ways of romance, Tonks' clumsiness and Seamus' love of a good drink as just a few examples. Your OC was very cool as well.
Honestly, I could go on and on about all the small details in this story that I enjoyed but I will not bore you.
I will simply say that I think this is very well written and I am looking forward to checking out your other pieces in the near future.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2009-10-02 10:48 am (UTC)Honestly, I could go on and on about all the small details in this story that I enjoyed but I will not bore you.
I will simply say that I think this is very well written and I am looking forward to checking out your other pieces in the near future.