This was marvelous and wonderful and exactly as it should have been on the show. I adore stories that fix what the show's writers' managed to screw up, and you did it. The team was a 'team' again, and the loyalty to one another, to Tony, WOW! Yes banter is cute and funny and snarky, but the way Ziva and McGee and even Abby for that matter, treated Tony when Gibbs was gone made me want to smack them all. You fixed it and did so good.
Delighted that Jenny was stopped before she managed to do serious damage to both Tony and Jeanne. I'm not a fan of the Jeanne character, but she had never done anything illegal or wrong, and Jenny had no justification for siccing a federal agent on her to essentially ruin her life.
I like your version of SECNAV much better than the one we've seen on screen. I really, really don't like Davenport, so I'm going to pretend that SECNAV is the one from JAG and him I liked.
This whole story was a treat, and I loved it. Thank you very much for sharing.
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ninetydegrees
Love In The Aftermath
on 2010-07-05 04:21 am (UTC)Delighted that Jenny was stopped before she managed to do serious damage to both Tony and Jeanne. I'm not a fan of the Jeanne character, but she had never done anything illegal or wrong, and Jenny had no justification for siccing a federal agent on her to essentially ruin her life.
I like your version of SECNAV much better than the one we've seen on screen. I really, really don't like Davenport, so I'm going to pretend that SECNAV is the one from JAG and him I liked.
This whole story was a treat, and I loved it. Thank you very much for sharing.
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