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Okay folks, you'd think with the numerous communities and such dedicated to just drabbles, ficcish people everywhere would know what the hell they were. Well, they don't. I keep finding bits of stories labeled as drabbles that are no such thing. So, for the remedial students, let's have a quick review.

What is a drabble? (A question to be answered in three parts.)

1. A drabble is a story of exactly 100 words. Not 101. Not 500. Not 99. Not 50. 100. 100. 100. Do not write a scene of 768 words, slap it into your e-mail or onto your webpage and label it a drabble because it's *not*. 768 words constitutes a ficlet, not a drabble. 101 words is a ficlet, not a drabble.

2. A drabble is a scene in 100 words. Which means that there is a beginning, a middle, and an end. It is not just the middle of a bigger scene. A drabble should not have a half-page of author's notes (aka excuses) to be understood. Someone who clicks on a drabble should be able to read it and understand it all on its own. That's the whole point of a drabble. Well, that, and driving writers who do them insane.

3. A drabble is an exercise in finesse. To take a 112 word ficlet that you think is perfect just the way it is and scale it down to 100 words exactly takes more editing skill than any other writing project may require. Because not only do you have to kill 12 words, you have to do it and still make the story readable. If you can do it on the first try, you will be envied by those of us who have cut 14 words and then scrambled to try and find two that can be replaced.

The moral of the story? Drabbles are hard to write (and by write I mean write *well*), and should be attempted by all brave enough, but there are no promises you'll succeed.

And 101 words isn't succeeding. Neither is 99.

on 2004-03-15 09:47 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] writerpuppy.livejournal.com
And while we're at it, seven interdependent segments of 100 words each strung down a page isn't seven drabbles.

on 2004-03-15 12:36 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] perpet-fic.livejournal.com
Oh, excellent point.

Just because you can write 7 paragraphs of 100 words each doesn't mean you can write drabbles. It means you can write 7 paragraphs that go together and can't stand alone.

I'll have to go edit that in later.

Thanks!

on 2004-03-16 12:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] lilithlotr.livejournal.com
Thank you. This drives me CRAZY. What's with the newbies who want to redefine everything? A drabble is a drabble. If you want to create a new word to define a fic of 150 words, feel free.

And double drabble? I've seen a few lately, both real and fake. Real--two paired drabble. Not a ficlet of 200 words.

on 2004-03-16 07:18 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] perpet-fic.livejournal.com
It seems like no one wants to take the time to understand the difference at all. So you wrote 200 words. Congrats. Can each set of 100 words stand on it's own as a drabble? No? Then you've got a wee ficlet.

Argh.
Newbies suck.

on 2004-03-18 06:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by (Anonymous)
Agreed, but it's moral, not morale.

on 2004-03-19 06:00 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] perpet-fic.livejournal.com
Ack! Foiled by the letter e! Evil letter.
Thanks for the catch.

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