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perpetual_motionWho wants to beta a Fraser/RayK piece for me? I just finished up a long paragraph of dialogue and action, and I want to make sure it's set up correctly. Also, someone double-checking my Ray characterization wouldn't go amiss.
I'd post the problem paragraph, but it really gives away the entire story, and I'd rather keep that under wraps until the reveal [hint: It's obnoxiously cute.]
I'd post the problem paragraph, but it really gives away the entire story, and I'd rather keep that under wraps until the reveal [hint: It's obnoxiously cute.]
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on 2005-09-28 08:55 pm (UTC)no subject
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