Chapter 11 beta?

[perpetual_motion]

Chapter 11 of the HSAU is finally finished. It is also 5247 words, and I can't tell if all those words are necessary or if some of them just wandered in by mistake. Anyone got time today to give it a quick going over?

Comments

[crimsonquills.livejournal.com]

I'm happy to beta for you, but I won't be able to do it until I get home after work. That should be 5:45pm Pacific Time. Let me know if you still need someone then! :-)

(I would totally do it on my lunch break, except that I have so many tours booked today I'm not even going to get a lunch break. :-( )

[perpet-fic.livejournal.com]

That timeline works wonderfully fine for me. I'll pop it over to you in just a couple of minutes. Hope you do get lunch, and thanks so much!

[crimsonquills.livejournal.com]

Got it, and no problem!

(OMG, I want to read it now, but...tour starting in 5 minutes... *is strong*)

[perpet-fic.livejournal.com]

Be a good lantern! Duty first!